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The Black Crow

It's always a black crow, already in kindergarten. The one that will always have the nicest, newest and most shiny toys. It's always a black crow in school, it is he who cries out the highest and makes lots of noise and bustle. It's always a black crow at the workplace, it is he who pushed the most, hoes on the others and thinks he knows best. It's always a black crow in the neighborhood, who inspects the street and think that his crow's nest is best. It's always a black crow in the circle of friends, which flutters with his wings and takes the whole show, but it is the one who ends up with none! Entered poetrysoup's contest 06.06.2012

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Date: 8/30/2012 2:53:00 AM
Wonderful insight... splendid poem... I enjoyed! Terry
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Date: 2/17/2012 12:15:00 AM
Awesome perspective and entertaining read!
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/17/2012 3:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading, Jen! oxoxo love Laila
Date: 2/12/2012 1:41:00 PM
Interesting philosophy penned in these lines..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/12/2012 2:25:00 PM
Thank for reading and give me kind words! It is a pleasure to read your poetry and they give my so much! oxoxo love Laila
Date: 2/10/2012 3:40:00 PM
human nature has some nasty things, i am the one who shines and stings, more suffering for the rest, it brings....black crow blest..:)
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/10/2012 6:44:00 PM
You have a point there! Thank you for reading my poem! oxoxo love Laila
Date: 2/10/2012 2:24:00 PM
a sensitive portrayal of pride and ego... very though provoking and well scribed, laila... enjoyed! :) huggs
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/10/2012 6:43:00 PM
Thank you for reading! And comment my poem! oxoxo love Laila
Date: 2/10/2012 1:30:00 PM
Quite interesting one, I must agree. I enjoyed this immensely. :D Always, Laura
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/10/2012 1:35:00 PM
Thank you for reading and finding it interesting! oxoxo love Laila
Date: 2/9/2012 10:03:00 AM
Very well done Laila, I agree with you there is a crow everywere. - oxox love you!
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/9/2012 10:35:00 AM
Thank you for reading mom! oxoxo Love you Laila

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