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The Black Cat's Hat

We went to the market today. Twas an extraordinary stay – Children begged in their same old way. Grandma, please, buy this, that! Money was tight; dreams flew astray. Oh, how they wanted that fat hat! Grandma, please, P-L-E-A-S-E, buy us that hat! The top was tall; it was not flat. Red-white stripes like the black cat's hat. “We want one oh so bad.” We’ll both be good; please buy us that! I purchased one per lad. Imagination found its stay. Faces aglow in glad array. Each wore his hat without delay. Soon, amusement began. In hyperactive glad array, They spread their arms and ran. They passed Suzanne; watch out, stock-man! Down each aisle, two boys ran, ran…ran! They ran right past the tall doorman. Down the street to the right, Faster than an airborne toucan, To the candy store, they took flight. Racing behind, “Come back!” I yelled. Upon deaf ears, my words propelled. Steadfastly with purpose upheld. “Give me those hats right now.” Before long, their excitement quelled. Hats hidden, until now! © July 9, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 7/13/2011 8:25:00 AM
So sweet this is Dane. Lovely. Many congrats to you luv.
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Date: 7/12/2011 11:52:00 AM
So happy to see your poem at the top of the winner's circle, Dane. And I'm sure this was inspired by true experiences with your grandchildren. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:41:00 PM
Fiction...with love and experience!
Date: 7/12/2011 6:38:00 AM
Dane, Great job on your top winner. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:41:00 PM
Thank you for enjoying my poem...and for commenting.
Date: 7/12/2011 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Carol.
Date: 7/11/2011 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your first place win with this awesome write. I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Caryl. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/11/2011 6:07:00 PM
congratulations on your first place win with this stunner
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Russell.
Date: 7/11/2011 4:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Sara .
Date: 7/11/2011 3:27:00 PM
Delightful poem, Dane Ann!! Hooray for you!!! Congratulations!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Carrie, for your kind comment.
Date: 7/11/2011 2:30:00 PM
Great job Dane Ann. Congratulations on your first place win. Love, Joyce
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Joyce. It was a fun write.
Date: 7/11/2011 2:08:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your first place win in this marvelous contest using new form..luv..
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Linda-Marie. I do enjoy the challenge of trying a new form. Smiles.
Date: 7/11/2011 1:53:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win. I was totally carried away by the flow of emotion and love I rfemembered by grandma and thanks for refreshing my memories, Dane
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:45:00 PM
What a wonderful surprise to be choose as a 1st place winner in your contest. I am so happy. Thank you very much.
Date: 7/9/2011 12:02:00 AM
so fancy laden and greeat, dane... i feel the exciting mood! :) huggs, nette
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/12/2011 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. It is always great to hear your comments when you read my work. You don't know how uplifting it is especially when life has become so time consuming for me. I appreciate you.

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