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The Black

I am walking through the dark tunnel below the old, supposedly haunted house. My God, is it ever nerve wracking. The pungent smell of must permeates my nasal cavity. I can't see anything due to the blackness, the evil, piercing black. Even my own hand, only an inch or so from my face, is unseen, shrouded in darkness. I begin hearing a strange rustling sound behind me. I shrug it off. Again I hear it, this time followed by whispers, sounds of talking, and even laughter. "It's only my imagination," I say. Slowly the sounds become louder, and I turn just in time to see the blood red eyes staring at me through the black.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/28/2016 10:05:00 PM
Neill Bird, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/11/2015 5:40:00 PM
NEILL, this is a good read, thanks for sharing..... **SKAT**
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:47:00 PM
Nice, keep it up///
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