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The Bitter Sweet Autumn

The bitter sweet autumn, Bitter sweet autumn; During the month of great pride; In A week of enjoyment, But the summer did end at last. End of summer, end of summer, times shall change, The day of change came, A sad day; sad day, sad day, depressingly sad day, a harsh reality, A reality of sadness and sorrow; An unknown surprise. A surprise, a surprise, a nasty surprise; But on the other side, Oh on the other side, There was a spark of sweetness, So Complex and so fine; This spark of great wisdom, It showed itself to all; Oh spark of great wisdom, spark so majestic; For all who did see it, And for all who did not; This spark of great wisdom, It made itself shine. It shined, it Shined, it fluorescently shine, Over all the rest; That sad little blip, Oh how it was gone. It was gone for good, and so was the summer, It never came back. The past, the past, that beautiful past, It was gone for good; And never came back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/24/2015 6:46:00 AM
Here I am once again Derek, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/18/2015 6:45:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P -Soup, Derek - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:34:00 PM
Derek, this is very deep. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/17/2015 5:59:00 PM
Derek, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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