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The Bitter End of the Road

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The Bitter End of the Road Travelers coalesce as if from as dense fog about the grounds of the retreat. The lodge shimmers silver-gray amongst the changing autumn woods. The gravel way diminishes in rearview mirrors with the pinging sound of pebbles against the metal horses of the day. Civilization, ever trampling, encroaches upon what ages ago had been a pristine forest, now swarms to the Lodge’s gates: ants to the picnic late comers in search of the scraps, the leavings, of much abused nature. Slamming car doors, buzzing cell phones, endless chatter accosts the forest’s skirt. Beaten paths awaited those stalwart enough to venture in, rushing ever forward and upward through the crunch of fallen leaves, the snap of branch, the distant warble of unseen birds. Water, when near, adds its own rush, and babble. But, the smaller critters seem to have vanished tracks and spoor, trampled whether in reverence or disregard; it matters not. In our ever onward rush to enjoy, the sounds of cricket, cicada, the squirrels chitter, the owls call; we by our mere presence destroy. First Published by Poetry Quaterly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/30/2016 5:53:00 PM
No wonder this poem was accepted for publication. It so captures nature's beauty and man's "stampede" to see the last of what is left of it...all the while remaining strongly connected to their other world...away from nature. They miss so much! Very nice,
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Date: 2/16/2015 10:14:00 AM
"The metal horses of the day" Yes, and axes and tractors, all sorts of foreign crap. Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:32:00 PM
A deep and powerful write, Debbie. Yes, even our own presence destroys, let alone the rape of our countryside, rivers, seas and forests...very often by greedy and soulless developers. Indeed, all this leaves a bitter taste! #7 // paul
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Date: 2/14/2015 8:54:00 AM
Wow...What a compelling read...it's the sad truth of human existence...Though man was ordained to "take care and make use" of what God has provided for him, the flora, fauna, all the lush vegetation, he was and still is unable to carry out his task according to the command. Hence, "we by our own mere presence destroy" what has been entrusted to us for stewardship. Sad...Hmmn, got carried away there, Debbie. Your write urges one to contemplate...Warm Valentine hugs and smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:54:00 PM
A wonderfully written, powerful write, Debbie, that left me feeling saddened about the truth of our existence... :( hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:47:00 PM
this is a deep one about what we are doing to nature. A really nicely written poem, Debs. Congrats on the publishing of it.
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