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The Biscuit Maker

Going back to my childhood home today Oaks still there even though been long away Your memories I take with me heavy They are on my back; leaving them___ready To be free of oppressing memories Remembering him in his dungarees Yet hard seems the memory of him now Fierce, stony was his attitude somehow Fear and tension he did bring to the child Leave that one; go to another for awhile Inhale the aroma of Sweet Shrub__spring She would take child there__ the pleasant place bring Her kitchen pleasant aroma__biscuits Warmth, love, food, and comfort her best portraits (After reading Edna St. Vincent Millay, I was impressed to write this one..)

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Date: 4/16/2010 5:58:00 PM
sounds like a home filled with your loving family.a child will always brighten up the home when visiting.somehow they have that power.lol.i love small children,and crayons! can't go a day without my crayons.im obsessed with those coloring sticks.you always portray your home well,i can smell those bisquits, and i see your childhood, also i can feel your endless imagination there in that memory before you were able to put your thoughts into words.a very beautiul & cute write along with it's image.
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Date: 4/16/2010 12:40:00 PM
Such inspiration and such beautiful words Sara .. reading your poetry is like a fresh new morning every day... so touching and lovely... hope u are feeling well today..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:57:00 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Sara. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:24:00 AM
very nice I enjiyed this and thank you so much for all of your kind comments faleshia
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Date: 4/16/2010 8:21:00 AM
Re your query Sara,biscuits are what you call cookies I believe.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:02:00 AM
Making this one come to life. Today I will try something different, inspired by you. I will s.m. when ready. P.d. I think it is time to put another use of my thinking to write. Thank you. P.D. If you do a awesome job . I will try one my self.
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:56:00 AM
Good morning dear heart!! Enjoyed reading this memoir!!
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