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The Birds and the Bees

T ime is full of many surprises, H ere on this Earth, it’s true; E verything under the sun that rises, B irds and the bees and me and you; I never thought I would find, R ip tides of emotion like I found with you; D eeply buried, I had them confined, S omehow you were able to come and break through; A ll my life I believed me alone; N o one knew what I was feeling inside, D own from the heavens, you broke that wall of stone; T o save the tender heart I tried to hide, H eaven this must truly be, E verything in life falls into place; B reathtaking is what you are to me, E ver I await your embrace; E ternally I am yours to keep, S ee for you I have fallen deep.

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Date: 8/21/2010 8:55:00 AM
So glad to hear you have found "the one" who can save your "tender heart," Tirzah. Your Acrostic has a nice flow to it and I think it will do well in Carol's contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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