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The Birds and the Bees

T he birds have been around for centuries. H ow sweetly singing, winging on their way, E vanescent as a summer breeze. . . B ringing bliss supreme; then gone one day. I n your bloom of youth, one bird appears. R adiant, you’ll soar to splendor’s height, D runk with joy till passion disappears. S tung by love undone, you’ll face your plight. A las, your bird has turned into a bee. N aïve no longer, you have felt love’s sting. D evoted love you’ll seek as remedy! T hough you’ll wish to hear a new bird sing, H eartache may await. You must recall E ventually sweet passion’s birds become. . . B ees! How can you know real love at all? E yes open, you must seek a faithful one; E phemeral are the birds and yes, the bees. S till they will persist for centuries! FOR PD's Acrostic II Contest

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Date: 8/19/2014 1:39:00 PM
Prodigious win!!! Sara
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:07:00 AM
Wonderful write n so is ur win Andrea! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/19/2014 8:13:00 AM
Andrea, it is time we had that "TALK". SIMPLY STATED "BIRDS FLY - BEES STING".
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Date: 8/19/2014 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. God bless you and happy writing.
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Date: 8/19/2014 7:42:00 AM
A fine acrostic ! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:20:00 AM
a wonderful acrostic and a great win! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:36:00 AM
so good Andrea bees and birds help make our world super acrostic congrats on win hugs
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Date: 8/19/2014 1:41:00 AM
Another great win with this lovely acrostic, Andrea
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Date: 8/18/2014 7:16:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for the awesome Acrostic Poem. Enjoy my blog "Dedicated to You" --and YOU" if you like. Have fun enjoying all the winning poems. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2010 5:03:00 PM
This one TOO to my fav's shoulda done it earlier! LOVE it! Light & Love
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:51:00 AM
Simply outstanding writing Andrea. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thank you for entering the contest. Will have another soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:31:00 AM
Really liked the insight in this poem when I first read it, Andrea, and want to offer congratulations on your win! Great poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:31:00 AM
Andrea many congrats on your super win in Carol's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:26:00 AM
Nice win there gal! There's no easy way to know. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:15:00 PM
Many Congratulations on this wonderful win dear Andrea.
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:41:00 PM
Great work Andrea and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:34:00 PM
Andrea, So happy to see you take third place with this wonderful acrostic. You already know I loved it. Hugs, Connie
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:40:00 PM
lovely congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:36:00 PM
Very neat and clean conceived composition, Andrea. Congrats on the third place win in the contest.
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:52:00 PM
Congratulation Andrea! A cool idea for an Acrostic. And your third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:30:00 PM
A wonderful poem,............acrostic is always a challenge to make sense of...but you nailed it! Congrats Andrea!! :)
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your super win in Carol's contest... a fabulous entry and a wonderful win for an eloquent write luv..enjoy my friend..
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:54:00 AM
Oh wow, Andrea! This sure is one wonderful & melodic acrostic about the birds and the bees-- I just really enjoyed how you related it to how one approaches life & love-- & clever as well how you started it with the birds being around for centuries, then ending with the bees doing the same-- I hope this wins!!
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Date: 8/21/2010 1:39:00 PM
Your words were like a beautiful song.You lifted my spirits with this poem really enjoyed this write.Thanks so much Andrea for yourkind comment on my win.Teresa
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:51:00 PM
If only I could have that mentality, this is a very beautiful write on the birds and the bees very different you used lovely words I pictured this whole tree with the birds and bees giving it's beauty, very much enjoyed your write, and the best of luck to you on the contest..P.D.
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