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The Biggest Lie

It's better now, it's pretty good Things are going how they should I'm happy, now, I've been alright You've been out of mind and out of sight You're just someone I used to know Just some flake that doesn't show No, I'll never think of you again You only pass through now and then But not in my heart, no never my heart Not since you tore my all apart; You're nothing but a silent shadow Whisped away by moving thoughts Of you and I, of you and I, of you and I And I'll never think of you again . . And I just told the biggest lie

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:47:00 PM
    Nice poem. I can feel the emotion exuding through your words - JH

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 10:17:00 AM
    congrats Dana'lynn on a wonderful win for letting go luv..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 8:01:00 AM
    wow!!!!!!congrats on the placement in the "letting go" contest......~sashi

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Lisa's "Letting Go" contest Dana'lynn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 9:14:00 AM
    lol, an honest gemini i see...

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:00:00 AM
    I believe poetry was invented to relieve hearts rent by pain. Another classic Dana' lynn poem.

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 9:22:00 AM
    nicely said! i love the title and last line, especially balanced against the rest of the poem.

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 4:28:00 AM
    Feeling of lost love will stay loooong my friend,but it wil be better. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 12:28:00 AM
    I know the feelings you've expressed here all too well! Really liked,Deb