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The Big Loss

Walking down the dark tunnel Amidst absolute peace, Filled with bowl of silence And there's no sign of war sharpnel. A big tree on my way it stood, A shadow on the tree is espied- A figure can't be seen in the darkest region of hell- All the worldly frowns seemed to reflect from its every cell. I asked him what's he trying there When there's peace everywhere out here? And there's nothing to fear And no worries to bear. From the top he spoke "Its all right with the peace present here But I miss my nears and dears; And I have jobs left to do in the earthly bower. I spoke -"Life is over", "Death occupies the future, There's no point trying to climb out..... --He jumped infront of me like an angry lout. He was the man I killed the last day! I repented so that he forgives me; It happened when I drove the lorry And hit him in a hurry. He told me my 'mistake'- 'a lot it meant'; It caused many to faint; He had still time to enjoy the worldly scents- Which I had ended in a second. Mistakes are irreversible often, Its only made by humans; Remamber once you enter the lion's den-- You may never return again. The bitter truth upon me dawned, I also met the same fate in the very dawn! The mistake that I have committed in a hurry- For the rest of the eternity it will make me sorry!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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