The Big Bang Laid Bare

programmed my 3d printer to build a cosmos ~ then all hell broke loose by David Kavanagh

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/12/2022 12:28:00 PM

This is so clever, your wit is unsurpassed in this Monoku! I enjoyed Harry's comment, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/13/2022 1:16:00 AM

I was guessing Jennifer the only way I’ll ever build a cosmos will be in a 3d printer, but no doubt it will explode in a Big Bang, the idea perhaps brings a little food for thought, cheers David

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 5/10/2022 10:00:00 AM

Tee-hee :-D Good one David! Cheers Anne :-)

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/10/2022 10:19:00 AM

Thank you Anne, it’s a long shot but who knows, early stages yet, cheers David

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/10/2022 2:28:00 AM

Makes a change from the human race, David. Or maybe your printer was telling the truth, the way we are??? So much to think about here. Great poetry...Harry

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/10/2022 3:27:00 AM

Thanks Harry, I was hoping readers would see different scenarios, and get them thinking outside the box, your comment just reinforced my intentions, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/10/2022 12:59:00 AM

Lol, you forgot to put in the god particle. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/10/2022 1:50:00 AM

I’m banking on that to come later Tom, to sort out my mess, lol, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/9/2022 6:53:00 PM

Heh heh, nice one! Love it. xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/10/2022 12:38:00 AM

Makes you wonder Super Mo, guess I’ll just have to wait 14 billion years, to see if it turns out a success story, cheers David