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The Beyond

A time to travel The time to see A space full of destiny Through eyesight long and far The distance that once divided may gather Sensing the most small and microscopic in detail A universe of galaxies with infinite matter To notice the warmth and difference after a solar flare Life and the amount of time in between To travel or to see all things never seen The beyond reality and escape of where none have been Space a place where we encapsulate Where did we begin?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/2/2017 8:59:00 AM

Join me on the Starship Enterprise. I have always imagined the wonders of time and space Travel.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 12/2/2017 7:15:00 PM

This is such a fun comment! I would gladly join you on the Starship Enterprise however only if it is Scotty of course that beams me up! I too wonder at times about space and the beauty of the unknown that is why imagination is great. Yet I would love to look through a large telescope one day for inspiration. Thanks for stopping by!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/28/2017 5:19:00 AM

A beautiful debut poem, Kristina. A belated welcome to PSoup, sista. This thought opus of brevity is like the universe ... too little of it do we really know, too much of it still for us to see. Such awe and wonder of the cosmos outward and within does your pen divine. Spilling glorious ink all over our pre-conceived notions of antiquity. A poem of sheer splendor. A fave for sure. Love and more love to you and yours.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/28/2017 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Freddie for such a lovely comment. I truly felt the vastness of our limited space perception with this poem. It is nice to have such a comment that inspires me to continue with my own way of love for writing. I appreciate you stopping by with encouraging words.

James Inman

Date: 11/28/2017 4:21:00 AM

Thoughts on the wonder of the universe and where we fit in, a lovely write Kristina.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/28/2017 11:07:00 AM

Exactly where my mind was in the beginning of poetic writings, thanks for your comment James.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 11/7/2017 12:50:00 PM

Nicely said there Kristina. The answer to your question is Christ Jesus, to were did it all begin Amen.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 11/8/2017 4:23:00 PM

Ok, got it. I also did like your imagery.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/7/2017 6:22:00 PM

That is the answer I did seek to have spoken through this poem. A different view of a beginning with use of a galaxy point of concept. An epicenter towards life. Birth. :-)

Silent One

Date: 11/4/2017 10:49:00 AM

Great first post Kristina...Welcome to poetry soup..