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The Betrayer

I Love you was nothing but a game But my feelings will forever be the same Your tongue was a double edged sword Pierced through my soul and broke my heart straight you looked in my eyes and lied You said if we broke is the day you die But you living and moved on that's a lie Am here wondering why should I hurt But i guess life is full or good and evil But we choose non they just happen And the live us hanging asking if there is love Or if there is peace and joy

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Date: 11/17/2015 10:19:00 PM
Tshephan :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Tshephan Timuno
Date: 11/18/2015 2:26:00 AM
Thank you, am greatly humbled
Date: 11/4/2015 3:44:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem - I wish you luck with many more poems - A pleasure to meet you here, Tshephan :) - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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Tshephan Timuno
Date: 11/4/2015 5:02:00 AM
THANK YO SO MUCH
Date: 11/1/2015 3:15:00 PM
Tshephan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/1/2015 9:39:00 AM
Hi Tshephan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Tshephan Timuno
Date: 11/2/2015 12:42:00 AM
Hello beloved am so humbled by your warm welcome, My name is Adolph and am from Botswana, i have always been afraid of writing but recently i have overcome my fear and a trying my best to pour out my heart
Date: 10/31/2015 2:52:00 AM
wow, that is deep, Tshephan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tshephan Timuno
Date: 10/31/2015 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much I am greatly humbled by your feedback and I am glad to have you as a friend

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