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The Bestial Tongue

The Bestial Tongue At the crepuscular hour my visceral thoughts contemplate, In halcyon conversations the bestial tongue Shoots poisoned arrows on friendly enemies, A hidden jealousy surfaces on pretentious love bonds. Opulent pride at slaughtering hearts takes over, Withered wit is followed by shallow desultory apologies. The venom poured by the cynical temperament In his, so often, moments of exuberant weakness, Becomes the darkened penumbra of relationships So hard fraught over years of sonorous hours. January 18, 2015 Contest: Speak No Evil Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 2/6/2016 9:40:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/28/2016 12:10:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 2/2/2016 10:44:00 PM
Balveen, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/3/2016 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 2/2/2016 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations for your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/3/2016 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Susan!
Date: 2/2/2016 10:35:00 AM
You wrote for this challenge in a wonderful fashion, Balveen. Congratulations.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/2/2016 10:57:00 AM
You're so generous with your compliment...thank you.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/2/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Lin & look who is complimenting-who herself is superb!
Date: 2/2/2016 9:12:00 AM
I like this Balveen. Words can hurt, especially from someone we care about... but only if we let them.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/2/2016 9:14:00 AM
Glad you like it James! Thanks!
Date: 2/1/2016 9:29:00 PM
Balveen: Many congratulations on your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/2/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Sathya for your visit and ppreciation!
Date: 2/1/2016 8:32:00 PM
Balveen, this is an extraordinary poem. Very impressive. It is obvious why you won. A7
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/2/2016 9:17:00 AM
That's sweet of you, Daniel!

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