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The Best One

 The greastest gift I received this year
 Was just the fact that you weren't there
 The kids were happy and not afraid
 You are finally fading away
 There was peace and laughter in our hearts
 And you were not there to tear it apart
 Its to bad that you cant see them smile and free
 But, thats the best present anyone could give me

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  1. Date: 3/9/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Lay's contest Crystal. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 4:48:00 PM
    Congrats. Crystal on your special win, much enjoyed your poem love vie

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Powerful penned winning entry! Great job! Pleased of this poem's success..I could have a similar story!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 9:12:00 AM
    An empowering write Crystal, full of images of strength and triumph. Thank you for sharing and congrats on your win. Lay