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After I got my two front teeth, all I wanted for Christmas one year, was a letter from my dad who was working offshore. I was in for a total let-down. You know what they say..."You can't always get what you want" Sometimes what you get...is even better :)

I was one of seven children Raised in a tiny three-bedroom house The rooms were so small They could comfort a mouse Always, at Christmas We would cram 'round the tree And I'd look for the presents That were gift-wrapped for me One special Christmas Sorry, I can't remember the year But I remember the present That had shed me a tear My dad who was away Two months- offshore Had sent me a letter Just two weeks before He mailed it from London To our home in U.S. But it must have got lost Or tossed...in the mess That's what I wanted most for Christmas I couldn't think of anything better Not a bike, not a toy, nor money I just wanted to read my dad's letter I recall my mom telling me As I sat weeping on the floor I have one last surprise, son My Dad- (((WALKED THROUGH THE DOOR))) A Christmas Gift Memory Poetry Contest Sponsored by BJ Legros Kelly 12/1/2021

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Date: 12/30/2021 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, with this awesome poem, Charles! As the daughter of a serviceman, your poem truly resonates with me. I recall so well missing my father in the days when he was stationed in Formosa, and the joy and excitement at his return. Your poem touches my heart, and is a fave.
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Date: 12/28/2021 1:01:00 PM
Back again to offer another congratulations! How awesome to see this in the Best New Poems list! It is a beautiful poem! I'm so happy to see it has well deserved recognition!
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Date: 12/27/2021 9:38:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem. It really touched my heart and made me cry. Congratulations on your win! ~Anna
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Date: 12/27/2021 9:44:00 AM
Dear Charles, I must admit your winning poem had me in tears~Beautiful! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 12/26/2021 3:20:00 AM
Indeed, a great gift in person to a person who wished to "just wanted to read my dad's letter" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/24/2021 9:21:00 PM
Back with Congrats on your win! Awesome job!
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Date: 12/24/2021 8:00:00 PM
Back again with congratulations on your win. Merry Merry Christmas my friend
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Date: 12/24/2021 6:48:00 PM
Charlie, oh my goodness, we all cried reading your beautiful poem. Thank you for entering the contest, what a beautiful gift, there couldn't be a better gift in the world. How wonderfully precious. Merry Christmas! May you and yours have a wonderful new year ahead, filled with much joy and health. <3
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Date: 12/22/2021 6:39:00 PM
Ohhh.. dear Charlie, your poem is so very heartwarming and tenderly told. The emotion is palpable in every poetic line and my heart swelled with your last two lines - your tears of despair to tears of joy! An incredible intimate recollection from your precious pen, my charming friend. Warmest wishes for you and yours to enjoy a merry Christmas and a happy and healthy new year.. ~Susan P.S. belated congrats for the honor of POTD.. so richly deserve!
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Date: 12/13/2021 10:36:00 AM
My friend, this fully deserved the POTD that was awarded. Brightened my day just my having found and read it. A true gem and a fav too. God bless..
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Date: 12/13/2021 10:35:00 AM
My friend, this brightened my day. Your poem fully deserved the POTD it was awarded. A true gem. God bless....
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Date: 12/13/2021 10:33:00 AM
My friend, this fully deserved the POTD that was awarded. Brightened my day just my having found and read it. A true gem and a fav too. God bless..
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Date: 12/8/2021 2:41:00 PM
Chills… so beautiful! My daughter was in elementary school, always a good girl. We got a letter, a page long, from the teacher telling of her misbehavior. I looked at her and said, “what’s going on?” She burst into tears, “I miss, Daddy.” He was away with work, until we could move there so I can only imagine… Congratulations on a superb memory and POTD!
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Date: 12/5/2021 10:27:00 AM
Hello Charles Messina, this would be a great Christmas gift. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 12/4/2021 11:15:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Thanks for sharing such a Christmas memory. Hearing from a loved one( especially a parent) trumps any gift. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a nice evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/5/2021 5:57:00 AM
Hi Alexis, yes, the bestest ever :) Thank you so much. Hugs Charlie
Date: 12/4/2021 5:56:00 PM
Aw, I had a feeling about this one, Sir Charles. Well-deserved POTD. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 12/5/2021 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 12/4/2021 11:42:00 AM
wow, this is an AMAZING memory. I think one of the best I have read and I also see you got a POTD. Congrats. Well deserved.
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Date: 12/5/2021 5:59:00 AM
Coming from such a wonderful poetess like you, Andrea. Means a lot! Thank you...
Date: 12/4/2021 6:25:00 AM
What a perfect surprise for you my friend, loved this poem and can certainly understand how it got POTD congratulations Charlie for being bestowed this honor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/5/2021 5:56:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, thank you very much! Hugs & blessings, Charlie
Date: 12/4/2021 3:22:00 AM
Charlie, a sweet poem, a belated congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/3/2021 10:57:00 PM
Such a heartfelt write. Congratulations on your Potd
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/4/2021 2:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rama!
Date: 12/3/2021 10:30:00 PM
What a beautiful memory! Congratulations on poem of the day :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/4/2021 2:54:00 AM
Thank you very much, P.S. :)
Date: 12/3/2021 10:22:00 PM
Enjoyed your touching potd!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/4/2021 2:54:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 12/3/2021 8:56:00 PM
such a touching heartfelt poem, Charlie, I felt the deep emotion. Congratulations on POTD... Hugs Eve
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/4/2021 2:54:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Hugs xx
Date: 12/3/2021 8:09:00 PM
What a sweet reminiscence.... sparked with tender affection. An unforgettable memory in your life. It shows how much parents matter in a child's life. Congratulations on your honor, Charles!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/4/2021 2:56:00 AM
Hi Valsa, yes, parents are everything to a child. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/3/2021 6:38:00 PM
After reading your note at the top, these words told me how this would end. "Sometimes what you get...is even better" I knew you would get to see your DAD. Such a special moment in your life indeed. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. My eyes are misty, in a good way. Congratulations Charles, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/4/2021 2:58:00 AM
Hi Brandy, perhaps I should have saved the note to afterwards (lol). Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Hope all is well...been awhile :) Hugs, Charlie
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