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The Bending Tree

"Guts and gain trap your more likely to stand on the hill" a tree that's now the oldest of ten has become so weathered and oddly thin but blood continues to flow in every scratched and surface of my skin Once a growing seedling no weeds would dare crawl in and a stone was cast a back all my little saplings would love me under the shade like a small animal pack they knew I would always kneel over them with no form of slack My branch is starting to bend but calm I stay rooted looking up at the dawn at ease with a gentle wind my soil now lumpy and dry no one comes with water to rest my troubled soul or even a word of good-by You see, sometimes you give and sway no matter the need or strain but when this old tree is bending low and money is no longer a flow just a whisper upon my ear gives me the honor for a new branch I may grow. T Reams 9/9/2015 Contest sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux Placed 7th 'Who do you think I am'

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Date: 9/29/2015 1:34:00 AM
Very wonderful write Tammy! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:21:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma for the great comment. Have a nice day.
Date: 9/28/2015 10:56:00 PM
Hi Tammy, congrats ----- Love SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:21:00 PM
Thank you again Skat for the comment. Love back to you.
Date: 9/28/2015 10:30:00 PM
Tammy a well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:20:00 PM
Thank you again Michael for the nice comment.
Date: 9/28/2015 6:13:00 PM
Lovely, congratulations
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Date: 9/28/2015 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment Shirley.
Date: 9/28/2015 6:10:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 9/28/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I was a fun way to right the poetry.
Date: 9/10/2015 10:35:00 PM
this is beautiful, Tammy. Soupmail.
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Date: 9/11/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Lady for the nice comment. Have a wonderful day.
Date: 9/10/2015 2:26:00 AM
Very lovely Tammy, it inspires the reader to have a positive, youthful and progressive attitude!He will love this, Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/10/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma for the really nice comment.

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