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The Beginning of My Poetic Side

At first I thought it's just waste of time, Making verses with words that rhyme.. Till someone asked if I can write, A poem for her I said "I might".. Then I feel she's mad about my answer, So I said "Yes, I'll send it later".. . . What I have to write is about music, I lay down to bed and begun to think.. My first two lines serve as the key, In this mind torture-like called poetry.. Even at first I want to scream and cry, I was amazed in myself on my first try.. . . I send to her so nervously, My very own first poetry.. Wondering of what her reaction would be, All I ever want is to make her happy.. I was so glad coz' I did'nt failed, To make her smile by the poem I made.. . . I am Cañeza Mark Jerome, I'm starting to love making poems.. Expressing my thoughts,experience and emotions, With words that excite my imagination.. . . I know my poem needs a lot better, Coz' in poetry I'm just a beginner.. I'm practicing my poetic skill much harder, I don't want to be called a Poetaster..

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Date: 11/20/2015 11:05:00 PM
Nice! As was said to me, keep writing. Peace and blessings my friend.
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:17:00 PM
thanks Steven! :)

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