The Bees

The bees make honey, the birds eat the bees Help flowers to grow when bees become compost Enables the bees collect nectar produced by flowers. Bees again make honey, the circle goes on Entwined together to the cycle of life and death Evidence of extinction they are considered when Starting to disappear fast on the earth +++++++ July 10, 2014 Form: Acrostic Dr. Ram Mehta Sixth Place Win Contest: Acrostic 2 by Linda

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 11:39:00 AM

Hi Dr RAm, thank you for the reply..Linda

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/20/2014 1:54:00 AM

An interesting write on the life of bees and how they are entwined with nature. Very nice acrostic poem, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2014 2:18:00 PM

Prodigious win!!! Sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/19/2014 7:47:00 AM

Congrats on your win!!!! Yes, the bees in USA are disappearing at an alarming rate. A very serious problem..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2014 7:22:00 AM

Educational work that you have penned for the contest and it is a great winner..Thanks for the visit to say congrats..Your comment are appreciated..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2014 6:18:00 AM

wonderful acrostic Dr Mehta - when we have no bees our life cycle will end. Hugs Jan xxx

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/19/2014 3:21:00 AM

This is a very wonderful acrostic poem, Dr. Ram Mehta! I'll start writing acrostic poems too! :-)Applause to your well, deserved win! :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2014 7:20:00 PM

Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for the awesome Acrostic Poem. Enjoy my blog "Dedicated to You" --and YOU" if you like. Have fun enjoying all the winning poems. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/19/2014 1:47:00 AM

Thanks for the appreciation of my poem, Linda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/10/2014 1:36:00 PM

Very fine acrostic Dr Ram ! U r right it's a vicious cycle,, life n death n life again,, gl in contest!