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The Beauty Way

How many times have I held my breath, too many times to count. So many times to listen to the silence within and without. How many times has my shallow breath attempted to stop the spin; Of atoms, raindrops or snowflakes The maple leaf’s flight in the wind. How many times this fruitless task have I ventured unasked to refrain, Seeking just to accept the rest, the beauty through the pane. * no 10's this was a 9

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Date: 6/19/2013 4:38:00 PM
A wonderful write, Debbie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/18/2013 9:52:00 PM
Beautiful, Debbie...Congrats...Yes, there is so much beauty outside the pane. Takes one's breath away! I agree
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Date: 6/18/2013 10:15:00 AM
wonderful verse
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Date: 6/17/2013 11:08:00 AM
I can't imagine any of your poems being so low on the winner's list.....ever. You are always a number 1 poet in my estimation!
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Date: 6/16/2013 3:14:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Debbie
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Date: 6/16/2013 2:44:00 PM
click the button to leave a comment on this poem////The system poured my soul upon another write(Don't know how????) But, I loved it (Congrats on this and THAT)~My Fav. "How many times this fruitless task have I ventured unasked to refrain" ~Oh such a great view................Love it!!!God bless you DG
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Date: 5/13/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Couplet of Faith contest by Michael... great Quatrain with inspirational lines ... enjoy another win TEACH...luv.. Linda-Marie (Pupil)...
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