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The Beauty of Yore

The memory still lingers, Of the times, we ingested this scenery. The solace of the water Brushing the distant horizon. Reminds me of the time, I spent with you...laughing and crying. Beneath the sun and moon, Where the canvas sky painted, Many inspiring sunsets, In a sequential series of beauty. This place still touches my stomach In a special way like you did, and I wish you were here, To reminisce those days with me. But the photo remains, As a souvenir of the best times of my life. Our impressions have cast their mark, On that very spot where we once stood And you took my breath away...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 9:28:00 AM
I'm just reviwing my old favs here at Soup and came across this beauty. Glad to see some recent posts of yours up now too. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:28:00 AM
ps. I sure do miss those photo contests you had!
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Date: 3/5/2010 8:45:00 AM
Beautiful, Raul. This one has to go to favs!
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Date: 3/4/2010 2:49:00 PM
this is such great poem the visuals entrapped me in your memories. this is a very beautiful piece and very heartfelt.Jo
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Date: 3/4/2010 4:12:00 AM
going to my fav Raul.. yes sometimes we move on in life..all which remains is a memory..a beautiful sad memory and many questions......I can relate to this gem..Charma
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:23:00 PM
Raul, This poem is wonderfully romantic and breathtaking in its beauty. I love the title too. Thank you for honoring me in your haiku contest. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:10:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem....enjoy all your writings...Thanks for the honor of 2nd place in your contest...I appreciate all the inspiration and challenges you give me...Marty
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Date: 3/3/2010 7:14:00 AM
As your poetry takes one's breath away..such a lovey poem Raul ..so sweet and intense at the same time.. a luving heart wrote this ... and thankxxx for this new contest... enjoyed this special poetry from your very gifted pen..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:37:00 AM
enjoyed reading, good writing
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Date: 3/3/2010 3:22:00 AM
Beautiful poem and a HUGE thank you for having me place in your poetry contest - I'm honored! Regards, Kelly
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Date: 3/3/2010 3:11:00 AM
What an inspiring and creative piece. Emotions flowing from this write to the reader.
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Date: 3/3/2010 2:49:00 AM
The beauty of yore worthy of adoration, Raul. Very inspiring. Many thanks to your judging me as 5th placer to your contest - Icy Cascade. (^_^) Noel.
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