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The Beauty of Sunset

The Southern Hemisphere has such beauty such a coolness in the air bringing colour to the horizon makes one want to stare In early morning seat on veranda watching the sun about to rise having tea and toast for breakfast looking above the South African skies It's beauty knows no bounds exceeding the grandest rainbow such brightness stunning the eyes looks such a blinding show For this experience is simply sublime taking away your very breath oh to go into fast freeze keep it still until your death Then from heaven looking down upon this stunning sun the creator who made it this is a job well done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/8/2014 1:31:00 AM
Photography is a hobby of mine, and sunsets are one of my favorite things to capture. You have perfectly captured their beauty with words, Gordon! I love the imagery in this poem! An amazing write!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/8/2014 4:16:00 AM
thanks Kelly, nice to hear your kind words, yes sunsets are a beauty unto thermselves, Take care, God bless, Gordon PS: will anser your soup mail later, thanks again.

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