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The Beauty of Peace

Sitting on the beach On a grainy bed of sand, The warm breeze whispers. * The warm breeze whispers In a soft current of air, Off the blue water. * Off the blue water Nature’s reflections reflect, The beauty of peace.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:41:00 PM

Compelling work again, nice one.

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/18/2009 12:22:00 PM

Captivating title and nice choka.

Tyler Davis

Date: 4/17/2009 11:56:00 PM

A relaxing place to visit.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/9/2009 7:06:00 PM

Very nice choka. It makes me want to try some. It has such a refreshing flow. Congratulations on being featured this week.

John Weber

Date: 4/9/2009 1:50:00 PM

Now you've got me fascinated with the Choka form; you're so crafty within the format, Raul! I enjoy the possessive on Nature, as we all tend to relate to those humanistic qualities in the world around us. Warm regards, John.

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/8/2009 8:07:00 PM

Wow Raul I just loved this poem and think I'll add it to my Favorites - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Leon Wilson

Date: 4/7/2009 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations Raul on your featured poem this week. God Bless. Leon

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/6/2009 5:24:00 PM

Very peaceful and calming piece...I love to sit back and just watch the waves rush in and the sunset...Such an incredible feeling of content there it just warms the soul...I have never seen this form before, you are good at it..I see that you are dabbling in a little of this and that...Nice work...Congrats on the Awesome feature..GB Always, Tyesha

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/6/2009 1:59:00 PM

Wow.... I like the serenity of this one!!! Great write. Nice imagery! I just love your work! Congratulations on having it featured this week! Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/6/2009 1:32:00 PM

Didn't realize this was featured. Congrats Raul. Well deserved. Love, Shar

Date: 4/6/2009 11:58:00 AM

I can feel the peace in this poem. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Diane Christian

Date: 4/6/2009 11:35:00 AM

so beautiful written, sounds so peaceful, and you are featured well done, God bless from diane

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/6/2009 9:03:00 AM

Reading this is like meditation. Beautiful, soothing and deeply peaceful. Sigh. Lovely writing Raul. Love, Shar

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/6/2009 8:43:00 AM

This is beautiful, so peaceful. Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy

Brian Strand

Date: 4/6/2009 8:23:00 AM

Congrats on your feature this week Raul.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2009 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/6/2009 6:11:00 AM

congrats on this being featured!!!

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/6/2009 4:02:00 AM

Hello friend Raul, thank you for sharing us this wonderful Choka and congratulations on your featured poem.Ernilando

Leon Wilson

Date: 4/6/2009 1:04:00 AM

A nice relaxing poem. I'm learning all the time here on this site thankyou to everyyone. I might have a go on a Choka. Thank you Raul. God Bless. Leon

Brian Strand

Date: 4/6/2009 12:57:00 AM

Such beauty Raul,one for my favourites .Rgds brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/5/2009 6:23:00 PM

Fascinating...More choka to spice up poetry's spirit. All the best.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/5/2009 5:23:00 PM

This is exactly how I feel at the beach, Raul. Indeed, "Nature's reflections reflect the beauty of peace." Very serene and comforting poem!

Steve Edmonds

Date: 4/5/2009 5:20:00 PM

Incredible, you seem to master every style. I like the way the sequence flows and the repitition of lines describing a beautiful place.