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until an hour before the devil fell, God thought him beautiful in heaven . . . (Arthur Miller) God created his angels long before the temptation of Adam and Eve, and the angel Lucifer was the most beautiful he moved freely between roaming earth and back to heaven and to the throne of God Lucifer fell from heaven because of his pride conceit in his own beauty his wisdom his intelligence his power he desired to be GOD and not a servant of God he was exceedingly beautiful and he used that beauty for evil God made him the highest of all angels a heaven where all the angels were beautiful but Lucifer was God's most lovely creation Lucifer wanted the throne of God wanted to take over heaven cast out God in any way he could divise but an hour before the temptation in the garden God cast the beautiful angel, Lucifer out of heaven he did not fall he was pushed out Lucifer came down and down created an anti-God city where he was the ruler he created hell and became the Satan that we know of today and temptation became his sword of power he can appear to you in many forms from beautiful or evil a monster with horns or even a hissing snake Satan moves freely between roaming earth and back to his dark city . . . his only purpose to fill his city of Hell __________________________ February 8, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/The Beauty of Lucifer Copyright Protected, ID 16-754-596-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 8/31/2019 5:41:00 PM
I never really had Satan down as the bad guy, more misunderstood . . . ; )
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Date: 9/1/2019 10:11:00 AM
Indiana, I understand what you mean, but still Lucifer did try to take over heaven and de-throne God, so he had to go . . . he had been the favorite of God's angels and the most beautiful until then.... or so I read.
Date: 4/3/2016 7:03:00 PM
Hi Constance, this is a beautiful, a most excellent write that does touch the Soul deeply. The gentle flow to the words just draws you in. I am back to belatedly give you congratulations on your win. Once again i give you a seven, for it is most deserving of the highest rating....MIKE.
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Date: 4/4/2016 1:45:00 AM
Mike, thanks for visiting and the beautiful and excellent, the congrats, and 7, so appreciated !
Date: 3/15/2016 11:11:00 AM
Broken Wings, Congrats in Julia's contest.. interesting topic. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2016 2:50:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the congrats, so grateful !
Date: 3/10/2016 12:21:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Broken.
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Date: 3/10/2016 10:39:00 AM
Upma, thanks for visiting my poem with congrats and the awesome !
Date: 3/9/2016 10:39:00 PM
Hi Constance, The beautiful Angel fell from Grace. Your dream takes us from the light into the dark. Your tale of Lucifer does take one on a journey. He is his own God now within his own city. I come within your dream and i see the visions so clearly through your words. I Loved this piece. A seven and into my faves so i can read it again when i wish....MIKE.
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Date: 3/9/2016 10:48:00 PM
Mike, thanks for visiting my Lucifer poem and I am so happy you liked it, I worked hard on this one, and thanks for the fav and the 7, appreciate !
Date: 2/13/2016 8:03:00 AM
you've got a great mind and an excellent use of word, such superb imagery and a divine message sent, i'm sure you meant Heaven in the first line of the second stanza, excellent you as always
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Date: 2/13/2016 5:06:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the compliment, and gosh thanks for spotting that oops, darn it, I hope my poem did not get the boot because of that, you are the best !
Date: 2/11/2016 9:51:00 AM
Deep rather dark write. I enjoyed it.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 10:07:00 AM
James, oh yes quite deep and dark, happy you enjoyed it ~
Date: 2/8/2016 1:10:00 PM
intense and beautiful, constance..love the light and shadow effect of a fallen angel.. huggs
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Date: 2/8/2016 4:07:00 PM
nette, thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment, so appreciated !

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