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The Beautiful Morning.

The beautiful morning sits alone, but with wonderful distress, and lonelieness. A tear falls from the morning sky, and it begins to cry a storm alive. Oh beautiful morning, what has you so upset? This morning cannot be like this. Even before noon, the morning sky, flooded the earth, no more dry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2009 9:16:00 PM
this is beautiful emily!
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Date: 5/24/2009 8:24:00 PM
Very poetic....another great one
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Date: 5/20/2009 1:27:00 PM
And where would we be, Dear Emily; the flowers and trees, if not for passions, of angels and seasons, weeping- A beautiful poem from a beautiful poet- One to keep!! poet butterfly
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:51:00 PM
Beautiful images used to convey the loneliness of the distressed morning, Emily! Like you, I have always regarded rain as tears from heaven. Seems it always rains when something awful happens. Very good poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:50:00 PM
Emily, I like feelings that metaphor from mind to paper eloquently....as your fine poetic voice accomplishes with the morning-storm representing your emotions...cool!!! : ) Jim
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