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The Beating Heart

I remember reading in school Of the “Tell tale heart” I read with a lump in my throat Hardly breathing A story that was so cruel The intensity of which it beat To inform others of the wrong That was done The beating so loud To the one that had wounded it Makes me wonder Does it happen now When someone breaks your heart Can they hear the pain Or does your heart cry out in vain People so calloused and so cruel Have they broken so many They forget all the rules To protect something so strong And yet so fragile Takes a person with devotion A person with character So this is to all Take warning Take heed Don’t give something so precious For someone to bleed Your heart just can’t sit alone on a shelf For to love the right one Brings abundant wealth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/25/2009 3:36:00 PM
In high school hearing Poe's Tell Tale Heart out loud was intense... but I never thought about my own heart or love... Your poem is wonderful. I'm so glad you wrote this and I found it. I like the ending stanza...beautiful images. I'll take the warning and heed to "heart." PS: thank you for your kind comment on my poem.
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Date: 2/16/2009 7:28:00 AM
Laurie, this is an awesome write. I love how you opened this. Wonderful imagery with that. It flows into a beautiful message of how we should treat each other. Great work, Lauriedo, Love Robin
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Date: 1/9/2009 4:03:00 AM
Wow........ Very nice, thank you for your honesty in your writing. refreshing
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Date: 12/1/2008 12:28:00 PM
with all of the broken hearts that I had while growing up it is a wonder that i still have a heart. but most of us recover and move on to new loves. this was a beautiful and so tender piece of lovely poetry.
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