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The Bearer of Bad News

So eloquently I delivered the bad news She really cried Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/15/2011 5:42:00 PM
Do you see that you are making judgements? the person was eloquent, the news was bad...do you see you could not take a snapshot of this.. [above you have sentence broken into 5/7/5] ..with this one I don't think we can work with it..perhaps as a senryu which is about humanity we could ..not really haiku material whose focus is nature and seasonal
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