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The Beach of Promises

The Beach of Promises 1. Fingers entwined, barely touching, turquoise waters teasing your dancing toes, strolling along that serene deserted beach, our promised dreams within aching reach. 2. Hands clasped, holding on, sea-breezes tickling the nape of your neck, walking together, alone, vowing to never breach, the dreams dreamed on that faraway velvet beach. 3. Hands in my pockets, alone, traces of you linger, teasing, lost in my scribbles, your memory fading out of reach, my thoughts ablaze, now and then, catching a whiff of your fragrance, wafting through alleyways of nostalgia, your hand in mine on our pristine beach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/22/2013 10:02:00 AM
Bravo, bruv. I love the gentle flow and rhyming scheme here. Nice work. :)
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Date: 3/22/2013 10:05:00 AM
Thank you, dear Delysia! Your poems are exquisite, so coming from you, I graciously accept the kind words :-)

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