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The Beach

crisscross clouds leave unseen tracks warm sands ruffle velvet shoals ocean sprays release salty tears fine pebbles squeeze wrinkled soles sapphire waves grind sparkling glass supple limbs explore hazy shores

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/16/2014 3:59:00 PM
wow, I love the descriptive and short lines you used. Very fun to read. Cool imagery.
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:39:00 AM
- Pleased to read your beautiful poem today, Ralph! - Have a nice day my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2014 7:01:00 AM
this is amazingly visual,, lovely poetry...
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