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"the Bass"

There was a young man who loved fishing, And left his young wife alone wishing- That a gentleman of class, would release her at last, from the lips of the bass she'd been kissing!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 11:35:00 AM
ps Hey, you could even rhyme it and say "kishing" since it's not very fun for her. hahaha
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Date: 3/27/2010 11:34:00 AM
REALLY good one, Bill. THat's how it's done! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/27/2010 10:03:00 AM
Funny way to start my day Bill.. so enjoyed reading your creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/27/2010 9:51:00 AM
Very clever, funny limerick, Bill. And here I was thinking I'd kissed too many frogs. Perhaps they were all just "bass" in disguise. (And I love fishing, too!) Love, Carolyn
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