The Barfly

Reel in son with one-liners Next to you sugar would taste like salt Hey sweetness, you have won by default Crazy catchy come-on caught a keeper 12/16/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:17:00 AM

Brilliant take John n a great win.. big congrats!

John Beam
Date: 12/23/2015 2:27:00 PM

Thanks for kind words, Upma.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/21/2015 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations, John!, Hugs dear friend and have a very Merry Christmas with blessings of love, happiness, wisdom, and wealth.

John Beam
Date: 12/21/2015 3:51:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Same to you and yours.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 10:07:00 AM

An enjoyable entry that has a 'reel in' title:) Congrats on a worthy win, John! ~ Regards // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/21/2015 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations! Cleverly done.

John Beam
Date: 12/21/2015 10:33:00 AM

Thanks, Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:44:00 PM

Cool alliterative phrase. Congrats on the win, John.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:59:00 PM

john, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

John Beam
Date: 12/20/2015 6:09:00 PM

Thanks, PD:)

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:54:00 AM

JOHN, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

John Beam
Date: 12/20/2015 6:08:00 PM

Thanks, again Skat, with wuv John