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Like a baptismal rite, the waters flow upon the sandy shore marred by the feet of travelers. There, in the golden glow of sun, where sky and land and ocean meet, each scar is washed away by the deep reach of faithful waves, poured from the font-like sea; here liquid spirit bathes the pitted beach and leaves behind unblemished purity. I walked along the water's edge and saw the prints I made, which in a moment's time were gone- the shore, agleam without a flaw, and I exulted in the holy clime- As if my soul, like scarred and trampled sand, was mended by the hallowed sea's great hand. May 12, 2015 Premiere Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon - Mile 11 Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 8/16/2022 11:02:00 PM
Sandra, I have always enjoyed your sonnets since the first time I read one back in 2016, though apparently I missed this one before. You have amazing skill for telling a captivating tale within the confines of the sonnet's cozy room. Your spiritual overtones of healing merge with the powerful effect upon the human soul that waves have. The water smoothing the trampled sand makes such a powerful metaphor for healing. I love it ~ going in my faves. Congrats for your win ~ John
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Date: 8/26/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit, congrats, and very uplifting and much-appreciated comments! Sandra
Date: 8/14/2022 10:56:00 AM
Dear Sandra, such inspiring beauty! Your couplet is a grand finale to an enchanting sonnet filled with earthly and spiritual splendor. Congratulations for your excellent win in Marks's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/26/2022 8:39:00 AM
Thank you again, dear Susan, for your congrats, and your always wonderful words of support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/12/2022 12:37:00 PM
Sandra, what a powerful simile comparing "the waters flow upon the sandy shore" to "a baptismal rite." You carry the comparison beautifully throughout the poem, to the splendid conclusion in the rhyming couplet. You are looking for more than pebbles and shells when you go walking on the beach! Congratulations on your win on Mile 11 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 12 has already started!
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Date: 8/26/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thank you again, Mark, for offering this Poetry Marathon Contest and choosing this poem to be on thw winning list! I appreciate that and your very uplifting and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 5/7/2021 12:10:00 PM
The last two lines are sublime. Congrats on your win with your lovely poem.
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Date: 5/4/2021 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:13:00 AM
Wow! Captivating insight! Congrats, Sandra!
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Date: 5/4/2021 7:34:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet, Sandra! Technically, the poem is flawless, and the message of the sea's cleansing power to erase the traces of beachcombers' footprints is amazing. Congratulations on a well-deserved, first-place win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2016 11:20:00 AM
beautiful sonnet sweet Sandra! Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/16/2016 9:25:00 AM
Wonderful poem of all those footprints in the sand written by your poetic hand, Sandra! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:12:00 AM
SO beautiful--a favorite! Congrats, Sandra. Janice
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:01:00 AM
Lovely! 7 my friend, Sandra!
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Date: 9/16/2016 6:01:00 AM
Sandra, congrats on your win. I love you sonnet. Fave. Agnes
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:41:00 PM
SANDRA, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2016 11:25:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2016 10:04:00 AM
Thanks, Skat. Sandra
Date: 1/18/2016 11:08:00 PM
Very wonderful write Sandra... loved reading this morning.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/19/2016 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/19/2015 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra on the resultant placement achieved..'
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:52:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
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Date: 5/26/2015 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/16/2015 10:25:00 AM
nice win
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:13:00 AM
A well written poem my friend... congrats
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Date: 5/26/2015 8:14:00 PM
Hi Poesy, thank you so much for stopping with your nice comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/15/2015 9:50:00 PM
Nicely written Sandra, Congrats!
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Date: 5/15/2015 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Ed, for your nice comments and support. Sandra
Date: 5/15/2015 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/15/2015 10:00:00 PM
Hi Eve, so nice of you to stop by with your congrats! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/15/2015 2:11:00 PM
How lovely and more so the Lord blessed us with memories.....AMEN....
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:59:00 PM
Hi Judy, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment. I am pleased that you like my poem! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/15/2015 1:34:00 PM
Great write and win Sandra, Congrats
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:57:00 PM
Thank you Joseph! I appreciate your visits and nice comments. Sandra
Date: 5/15/2015 12:27:00 PM
This is simply stunning Sandra - I love the imagery - amazing you didn't experience walking on the beach until your mid 20's - I was about 5 the first time I saw the sea - now I live surrounded by its beauty:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:37:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much for the nice comment. Growing up, my family had a boat and we did most of our vacationing along the Hudson River on up North to the Great Lakes. You are so fortunate to be surrounded by the beautiful ocean! Thanks again, hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/13/2015 7:23:00 AM
Sandra, stunning, meaningful and pretty, expressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, a hundred. . .
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Date: 5/13/2015 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings. I am pleased that you like it. Your kind and positive words are much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
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