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With her hands poised and ready, she said, “I will see you at the end!” Then like horses at the gate, the band would all jump in. At ease directing classical, Sousa, or big band, It was hang on to your seat, and get ready to jam! She corrected wrong notes, intonation, and sometimes raised her voice. Then the band would play it again, more carefully of course! At practice she was firm, but liked to have fun. She was quick of her wit, and rarely could be undone! She put in many long hours behind the scenes, Running the band like a well-oiled machine. She loved her sister, her friends, and her dear pets. It was a full life, and she had no regrets. She made the music come to life on warm summer nights, And friends would tap their feet to the melody in delight. Keeping in line the flutes, the reeds, and the horns, Carol Blake was the band director, a job for which she was born.

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Date: 8/7/2016 12:29:00 PM
I will come back to this poem often!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 8/7/2016 12:35:00 PM
Glad you like it. She was very dear to me. Music was her life, and she influenced many, many people.
Date: 3/26/2016 8:14:00 AM
I'm a little biased, but my favorite teacher in school was my band director also. Great write on that part. Band changed my life! Peace young lady:)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 3/26/2016 10:28:00 AM
Band changed my life too...
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 3/26/2016 10:27:00 AM
Glad you liked it Daniel!
Date: 3/26/2016 6:57:00 AM
Sounds like someone close to your heart. Good job Brenda...
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 3/26/2016 10:29:00 AM
Yes she was very close to my heart. She was my band director and friend for about twenty years. Thank you.

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