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Our son's graduation, West Point Military Academy, May 1981

The Band Concert It was not a typical musical concert on an indoor stage, but a marching band concert—and a very special one to me. I sat with family on bleachers that sunny day as the glorious band’s thunderous sounds filled my ears, and my chest vibrated wildly with the powerful music from brass, woodwinds, percussion, and resounding drums. As my heart beat in sync with the strong pounding rhythm, such deep patriotic emotion fully engulfed me, and I could feel my heart fill up with pride as it beat with the thrill of that music and with the vision of those great young men and women in huge formations, marching on their way to receive diplomas and off to serve our country. Then I saw him, our dear son, marching within that "Long Gray Line", stepping in unison with fellow classmates to that awesome music. The wondrous relentless rhythm from those drums and horns, together with the artistic and intricate merging formations, engulfed my whole being as tears filled my eyes with pride and joy— on that special day—at that one-time special event—in May 1981... Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Any Poem Written in 2015 Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 07/16/2016 ~Honorable Mention~ Contest: The Concert Sponsor: Craig Cornish Judged: 06/10/2015

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Date: 7/20/2016 5:57:00 PM
A great descriptive write, Sandra! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 7/16/2016 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your beautiful win. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/16/2016 3:59:00 PM
Time flies by so swiftly, but lovely memories like this one will never fade, Sandra! I love bands, and you gave life to yours; understandably proud of this special moment! Congratulations on this high flying winner! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/16/2016 2:08:00 PM
Sandra, you always bring out the best in different circumstances. This was not only creatively written but very informative lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/16/2016 2:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Luloo, for my nice placement. It was nice for me to bring this poem forth again in honor of our son and what a special day that was...35 years ago! He retired from the Army five years ago. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/11/2015 4:06:00 PM
sweet win
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:43:00 PM
How lovely, Sandra, to be able to convey such a grand event and then focus down on to one individual, so small in the scheme of things that day yet the largest thing in your heart. A Mother's pride, louder than any drum. Congratulations on your win. Viv x
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:27:00 PM
congratulations Sandra on your winning concert write :o)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/10/2015 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Robert! Both our poems were military service related! Thank you for stopping by! Sandra
Date: 6/10/2015 1:59:00 PM
I am 100% sure I commented on this before Sandra - have had this happen a few times recently where comments disappear:-( I loved your unique take on the theme - cant imagine a memorable event than watching your son - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/10/2015 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Yes, definitely a memorable event as our son graduated West Point in 1981! Thanks for the nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/1/2015 2:04:00 PM
Love your enthusiasm - the bass drum pounding in one's chest. I directed bands and orchestras since 1952. Retired now for many years. Love, daver
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2015 6:54:00 PM
So glad you liked it, Daver. It was such a memorable event! I appreciate your visit and nice comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/31/2015 5:26:00 PM
Sandra, I love how you wrote this poem for the contest, it is full of pride and love and an awesome write and thanks for visiting my poem, The Special Gift
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2015 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Broken. It was such a memorable event in my life! I appreciate your kind words of support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/31/2015 8:14:00 AM
Sandra, I know you are proud. Thank you for sharing your sons moment withus.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2015 6:51:00 PM
Hi Skat, thank you so much for stopping by to read this poem and for your lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra

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