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The Balm of Synchronization

It is dangerous to walk into the conscientious realm of another, To make love out of emotions long dreaded, long missed, and long lived Each choice we make to discover in one another Is sacred, momentous, and worthy of comprehensive purpose We, in principle, are made for each other, To live our lives in exploration of one another, To breathe into the depleted lungs, To bite the lip long quivering, To dress wounds as if they are your own I speak of unity, and I speak of strength I speak of daring yourself to know the ins and outs of my terrain Passing all impasses of disdain, sorrow, failure, and unimaginable pain, They marvel because we matter You stay because you understand You understand because I have long dreaded this moment I have long missed your breaths, And I have long lived your fears I have touched the lips that speak so clear, Wrapping your surfacing scars against the balm of synchronization A most treacherous climb into the safety of your arms, I anticipate the choice you make each and every day You know I wait, because you and I were made that way In turn, challenging the rest to discern what we have long understood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/24/2015 8:40:00 PM
I love the sense of destiny in this poem, that two rare birds can sing the same song, fly the same heights and swoops...two hearts "cut from the same cloth". "They marvel because we matter, you stay because you understand..." this makes me think of long vision love Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/24/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Justin.. your words always uplift and strengthen me.. I know you understand, and that is a priceless truth. ~Laura
Date: 7/22/2015 4:00:00 PM
Hi Laura Thank you for a piece rich in possibilities of meaning...true poetry!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/23/2015 7:09:00 PM
Why thank you for reading... because I absolutely LOVE reading your intriguing work! ~Laura
Date: 7/15/2015 10:05:00 AM
I am in awe! Just pure and straight words that to talk to me as a person, not just someone who attempts to write. I feel you in all the lines and verses. How can one not appreciate such sincerity? My fav verses are the first and the last...oh, and all the others in between! Forgive me for being late again, my friend. I am glad to see you continue to post.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/15/2015 1:58:00 PM
Yay! I am happy you enjoyed those lines! Your presence always brings me such joy...thank you!! ~Laura
Date: 7/15/2015 10:05:00 AM
And the line: "Passing all impasses of disdain, sorrow, failure, and unimaginable pain..." is just bursting with such need to be understood. I love this, Laura. Someday, when we are both very old, and you have collected all the recognition you deserve, I will say...I knew her when she was not yet so famous... hahahah... to the favs! hugs!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/15/2015 1:52:00 PM
You're so sweet... I felt balanced and strong writing this particular poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! I will always remember you - it is people like you that help me keep going! Your support is much appreciated! And no worries, no hurries! ~Laura
Date: 7/7/2015 6:37:00 PM
Empathy is a pillar of a thriving civilization and (as you note) a relationship. You have such artistry. Not all is pleasant as you point out, but our honor and experience can guide us. So, I wonder how you came to be so wise?. I have spent the past hour in your cyber presence and want to thank you for the exotic window.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/7/2015 6:45:00 PM
You are the wise one because you understand the depths and meditate on others' thoughts with a loving and intellectual mind. I crave such people in my life everyday...Your empathy and understanding captivates me. Each supportive word inspires me. Lots of love!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/7/2015 6:43:00 PM
Oops sorry duke. Wrong box!!!! I learn from what I see and feel. When the mind is open to new concepts, intuition guides us smoothly to understanding so satisfying...that or I'm going insane Duke....:) perhaps it is both. I love it when you visit my page. You are very special to me.~Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/7/2015 6:39:00 PM
Emile, thank you for your beautiful and colorful input. I will visit your page soon! Sorry I have been away so long!~Laura
Date: 7/7/2015 12:11:00 PM
Your words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created an atmosphere of synchronization that brought the whole scene to life in my mind. Emile. #7
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/7/2015 6:46:00 PM
Sorry..accidentally wrote my reply in Duke's box. My bad.

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