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The Ballad of Miss Dutton

THE BALLAD OF MISS DUTTON Little Miss Dutton, Bright as a button Sits with hands in her lap just so Neat and petite, Friendly and sweet, With little girls all in a row Quiet and demure, Polite and pure She teaches girls how to behave Not like the rough boys Scuffing shoes, making noise, Shooting guns, the things little boys crave But little Miss Dutton Bright as a button Has a secret, her own rough boy Though with her he is gentle He's a force regimental Has a gun and it's not just a toy They'll live life in clover When this trouble's all over But meanwhile they'll make the best Who can say what's to be Before the world is made free 'til then hope that their lives are blessed Little Miss Dutton Bright as a button Today has an extra bright gleam For one sacred day's leave To themselves they can cleave Live each hour in a blissful dream They have sworn true love now And he's made solemn vow To return when he's finished his chore He tries fears to dispel Kisses fondest farewell Then he's gone - and it's June ' 44. Little Miss Dutton Bright as a button Sits there now and a sad smile she yields But for him it's all over He touched the clover Now at peace in a Normandy field Quiet and demure, Polite and pure Girls follow in every way true Not like the rough boys Scuffing shoes, making noise, Shooting guns - that's what little boys do. This poem tells a touching story, contains a message, and has rhyme and rhythm

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Date: 2/4/2018 2:26:00 PM
I love this poem Geoffrey and I love Miss Dutton. A lot of feeling and wonderful description. As you say in your notes fiction, but I am sure for some it is a true story. Very deserving of a high placement in the contest. Congratulations and kind regards, Kevin
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/4/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and detailed appreciation, Kevin
Date: 2/2/2018 7:48:00 AM
Amazing ballad, Geoffrey, with a nice message too, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:12:00 AM
This is so good. Congrats on your high placement.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/4/2018 2:42:00 PM
Thanks ,Richard
Date: 2/1/2018 8:51:00 AM
Geoffrey, I appreciate your very meaningful piece. Well done. It reminds us all of the price of freedom... Congratulations on your strong showing! Thank you for sharing the podium with me. You have my very best wishes. :) Bartholomew
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/4/2018 2:42:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comments, Bartholemew, and congratulations on your success.
Date: 1/30/2018 10:52:00 PM
very nicely done Geoffrey. A very disarming poem with such a somber message.....and yet the wars rage on.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/31/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thanks for the thoughtful, kind comments,John
Date: 1/29/2018 8:04:00 PM
Wow, very powerful and skillfully penned, Geoffrey, and a deserving placement ... I love the structure and rhythm, the imagery is excellent, and the story poignant and substantive. Congrats, my friend, a beautiful feather in your cap, here! :-)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/31/2018 4:37:00 AM
Thank you Gregory. Your comments are, as always much appreciated
Date: 1/29/2018 7:49:00 PM
Well-written, Geoffrey. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/31/2018 4:36:00 AM
Thank you,Sandra
Date: 1/29/2018 6:50:00 PM
Well done, Geoffrey! Congratulations on your win! ...Fran
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/31/2018 4:34:00 AM
Thank you Francis
Date: 1/29/2018 4:30:00 PM
fabulous , Geoffrey, congratulations on your win..
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/31/2018 4:34:00 AM
Thanks,Eve
Date: 1/29/2018 4:26:00 PM
Very well deserved win. Superbly crafted poem. Congrats, Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/31/2018 4:33:00 AM
Thank you Line
Date: 1/29/2018 2:35:00 PM
Beautiful work Geoffrey, so well done, congratulations...
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/31/2018 4:32:00 AM
Thanks,Charlie
Date: 1/29/2018 2:23:00 PM
Geoffrey, Congratulations on your win. With Lots Of Love *SKAT*
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/29/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you for the award an kind words, SKAT
Date: 6/10/2017 10:06:00 AM
Well done Geoffrey! :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/29/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thanks Heidi

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