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The Ball of Yarn

A trail taut with torment Fraught with threads afray Once fastidious, your intricacies so fervent Now cease to self-fascinate and fade away. I washed away your beauty as I drank all you had to give, For I was poor and lonely, While you were all-too-quick to forgive. A fool, in an all-you-can-eat fools buffet, I was too quick To take what you were freely giving away. Now unwound the truth unfolds, To show the sew sawed and severed. A final, swansong voice to those untolds. My core torn, our souls entwined, your sanity... Untethered.

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Date: 6/30/2017 9:22:00 AM
Those last two lines bring your message home so powerfully, Rebecca. There is often a great deal of pain when truth unfolds..as you've aptly written. Thanks for your visit to my poem Never Shame a Woman.
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