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The Bald Spot

I awoke this morning and looked in the mirror. I saw a reflection that was not me. I became frightened and shivered with fear. I pinched myself to see if I was dreaming, but it was all reality. I took my hand and ran it through my thinning hair. My blond locks once thick and full, now thin and balding. I raised my hair back and saw my widow's peak with thick roots, and there was the bald spot that raised high. My hair was like silk. I shed a tear and reminised in the good old times. Then I grabbed my towel that was hung upon a golden hook in my closet, and went to take a shower and start a new day in this cruel and desolate world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/3/2013 8:31:00 AM
Chris Change is a part of life, but your hair isn't what makes you who you are. It's the person inside and how you treat others. Nice job my friend Thanks for the great comment on my Memories Of You poem. Hugs
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Date: 9/2/2013 1:08:00 PM
The loss of hair, and the beginning of a more mature age, can indeed be tough to adapt to. Nicely described, Christopher. Enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 9/2/2013 6:52:00 AM
The Japanese celebrate "imperfect" they devote art to it ....it's called "wabi sabi" google it! jimbo
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Date: 9/2/2013 6:49:00 AM
Nah! change is life! Celebrate and dig it! Your special gifts of poetry are blooming and growing! 'Nuthin to do with your silly hair, dude! jimbo
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