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The Bait

I recently visited cedar point Its such a lovely,carefree joint I lost a pink flower My sis dropped a dollar But we were all fine in the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2009 3:29:00 PM
what do you mean by bait? is there some sort of pun invovled
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Date: 7/3/2009 2:28:00 PM
am also enjoying your take on your work!! great poem again! Willow!! jim
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:26:00 AM
sweet and simple the way life's when it's easy!Thank you for your kind comments. Light & Love
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Date: 6/17/2009 6:47:00 PM
another great poem has eeked its way from your heart to the box in wich you write it in bravo!
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