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The Badlands

The Badlands Can you see what they’re lookin’ at or Hear what they say? Maybe they’re stoppin’ to take time to pray. Could they know the ending is near? Fate may have brought them a measure of fear. We’ve followed them far and seen what they’ve done – And now we see them, here on the run. They don’t want to give up - It don’t seem likely they will. And the scene here around us Brings an ominous chill. They’ve rode these badlands Much longer than we - And they can observe things We never see. I can’t help but wonder what history will see, When this scene is painted by pure destiny. What if we hunted them as long as we did? Then, we became hunted by Butch and The Kid? Author’s Note: Based on the painting “Cowboys in the Badlands” By Thomas Eakins and entered in PSoup contest sponsored by Isaiah Zerbist 9/16/14

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Date: 8/8/2017 11:23:00 AM
I heard music as I read this piece. The theme from Gunsmoke. Well done.
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:30:00 AM
wohoo! amazing !! it's good to be back again after one year glad to check my new poem PYRAMID :)
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Date: 1/7/2015 11:13:00 AM
The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. I enjoyed reading this poem, it rings true and real in a poetic way.
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Date: 12/26/2014 8:34:00 PM
John, wow, I love cowboy poems, and mostly Ballads... I read up much on The Kid, and Butch, plus others... I love this, Hope your Christmas was a blessed one. Linda
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Date: 10/23/2014 11:00:00 PM
Awesome write Jim, I enjoyed reading this so very much, a work of art...Sharon G.
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations, John; well done.
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:43:00 AM
I ,love the rhyming in the poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:45:00 AM
Good work JOhn, glad to see your work getting a big win. BG
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:15:00 AM
you painted a great picture here - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2014 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John. You have great rhyme here in this well done poem.
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:00:00 PM
LOVE THE SUBJECT MATTER THE VERSE AND COMPOSISON WELL SAID AND WRITTEN THANKYOU FOR YOUR COMENTS ON MINE I WANDER THAT WRITE WAS ACTUALLY A PART TWO TO I WONDER WHICH IS SOMEWHERE ON HERE DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:42:00 PM
Even before I read the last line, Butch Cassidy and the Kid came to mind......you painted this amazing picture so well !! Great job!
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John Posey
Date: 9/30/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thanks, Darlin'. I love your visits.... Jake
Date: 9/25/2014 3:36:00 PM
Jake Congrats on a well written rhymed piece. To me, the format makes it a challenge. When I think of rhymes I juxtapose it with uniformity, probably inappropriately. I have never used this format before so that's the reason for my angst....lol Hey, praying doesn't hurt anyone, even in the Badlands. Good effort Jake. Thomas
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Thomas Carney
Date: 11/11/2014 10:51:00 AM
Jake I stopped by to see if you have any new poems. I have been awol as well. I hope you are well and look forward to next poem(s). Thomas
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John Posey
Date: 9/26/2014 4:13:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. This one came easy once I found the starting point.... I'll be reading more of your posts later... Jake
Date: 9/18/2014 12:27:00 PM
one awesome adventure spiced with your images, john... very interesting.. huggs
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John Posey
Date: 9/18/2014 12:36:00 PM
nette, You are generous with your praise ..... I appreciate your visits and comments on my work. You always leave my heart smiling..... Love ya...... Jake
Date: 9/16/2014 9:59:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on the adventure and culture of the cowboys, John
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John Posey
Date: 9/16/2014 11:06:00 PM
Much obliged, Doctor. This was a fun one that I chose to enter. I've never attempted this before..... I'm still troubled about it.... Jake

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