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The Baby

I held the SPLENDOR baby In my LAVENDER night gown The FRAGRANT baby lit up the room And turned my world around The BLISS baby WAFTED A breath across my face As it WHISPERED A DULCET ELOQUENCE That only I can trace It babbled in a way So we had this understanding That the sound of TRANQUILITY LILTING Was all that his little heart was demanding FOR WORD WARRIOR CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2010 10:04:00 PM
Sorry I never wrote and told you thanks for entering my contest that one time. I will have to start doing that to all the people in the future who enter any of my contests! I remember I nearly gave this one an HM.but I think I was trying to limit the number of them. Sorry about that! It was cute! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/22/2010 12:24:00 AM
very well written. wish i had that kind of talent. if i need pointers, i'll come to u.
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Date: 4/19/2010 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on an excellent poem Faleshia, I don't know if you placed, but good job. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:07:00 PM
Great rhythm and rhyme...Should do well and be in the winner's circle..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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