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The Ashes of Desire

Your contributions are pennies in the well- All your efforts, yet no ripple can be seen at all. If you want a memory to hold, Then come and make one with me now. Dance me beneath a sky of fire; Lay me down on the ashes of desire. Wind your fingers in my tangled hair, Lest this passion quickly be aborted. Make your move with force; make it fast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/31/2015 3:55:00 PM
slow down girl, why should we rush....I want to enjoy every part of you so hush....don't say a word, let me do my work....I am gonna arch that back higher than the miniest skirt....;)
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Greta Kitts
Date: 9/8/2015 4:31:00 AM
Goodness, how does a girl overlook this comment?! Clearly need to stop daydreaming and pay attention!! ;) Thanks Eric, love this one!
Date: 8/30/2015 1:55:00 PM
Really cool, I do enjoy your poetry I want to feature it on my site if that is ok with you. thanks :)
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Date: 8/30/2015 5:09:00 AM
Hot! :-)
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