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The Art of Singing

I began to sing aloud and put my whole throat in it. Standing straight and tall— thought everyone would listen and beckon those they knew. Scant regard was my reward. Thus I gathered friends, and as a choir we sang. Sweet and high angelic anthems filled the air and echoed sweetly, yet fell upon deaf ears. Again, we raised a chorus, lilting tones transcendent, but their common tasks continued. So as one we shut firmly up— took flight on silver wings and vanished in the clear blue sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/30/2016 2:22:00 PM
This piece is just the perfect start I need to come back home to my wonderful poetrysoup. This is amazing, beautiful and a high seven! Well done friend
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Mark Peterson
Date: 5/10/2016 9:01:00 PM
Sorry I'm late in responding to your comment, Funom, which I treasure. We welcome your return!
Date: 4/3/2016 12:35:00 AM
When people are too busy to appreciate music they just might miss the boat! I enjoyed this Mark. I could visualize your ending so clearly. Hugs, Connie ; )
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Date: 3/18/2016 9:22:00 PM
Re-reading this again, and the birdsong makes much more sense to me ... not sure why cicadas came to mind (I'm weird sometimes!) ...
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Date: 3/18/2016 10:51:00 PM
Thanks for doing this. You may be weird, but you seem to be pretty good at it. Some people are just weird.
Date: 3/18/2016 1:28:00 AM
Almost thought you were talking about cicadas in the end (with the silver wings into the clear blue sky) ... that would have been an amusing twist. Sad when people don't stop to listen and appreciate beauty. Discouraging ... but I guess you gotta sing for yourself if no one else. Well written poem ... I liked how your last bit could be taken a couple different ways.
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:11:00 AM
Well they could be cicadas. I'm familiar with their sound from my years in Africa. I had birdsong in mind when I wrote it. Of course the point is still the same, as you averred. Thanks so much for stopping by with your interesting and thoughtful comments.
Date: 3/11/2016 5:11:00 PM
Ah, the trials and tribulation of the musician, but you gotta suffer pain, baby. This is good stuff. daver
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/11/2016 6:09:00 PM
Thanks, Daver, you got the gist of it. It's been awhile, so I need to pay you a visit.
Date: 3/10/2016 9:00:00 PM
Oh, I can really picture this, and sadly, people do not take note of beauty when it is right in front of them. A really well crafted little poem.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/11/2016 12:04:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for stopping by. Hard for me to keep up with you, but you always come through for others.
Date: 3/6/2016 7:19:00 PM
A poignant and most inspiring read! Hi Mark, hope all is going fine your way! Thank you for sharing your lovely poems!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/6/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, lovely Suzanne. So glad to hear from you, and thanks so much for your comment.
Date: 2/29/2016 9:56:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem and so very moving from this unique perspective... Nicely penned, Mark!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 2/29/2016 10:27:00 PM
Kelly, I so appreciate your visit, and know that your poetry is such a pleasure to read and contemplate.

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