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The Art of Restraint

Wide-eyed and nerves clenching, I await the vacancy that fills the page As eraser smudges and blackened lead Sear through stanzas left for dead Leering on the verge of lines, I hear the symphony come to a halt Captive sounds unravel the thread Burst at the seams like words unread Jaw-slacked and brows upturned, I fathom the launch of syllables Drifting from my tongue to label Sights and sounds recounted as tale Calm despite gut-wrenching, I watch the drumming of my fingertips Fall into silence on the kitchen table Like wounded soldiers, weapons disabled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/12/2016 9:55:00 AM
Kim, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/21/2015 4:11:00 PM
KIM, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
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Date: 1/3/2012 8:11:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:29:00 PM
Yes a most excellent description of the sometimes torture of writing I too posted one today discribing my museless morn! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2011 12:15:00 PM
Wonerful writing, the descriptions are unique and vivid and I enjoy the dark twists in it as most of my writing has, congradulations on making it through round one, Mark
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kim. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:37:00 AM
Superb writing, Kim. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 11:26:00 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Kim. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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