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The Architect

He admired the columns, walls, floors and roofs of the marble castles; they were so beautiful that visitors from far away lands cried tears of awe - they felt as though they were in heaven. He had a plan in his mind; it had a structure of castles which glowed like the Sun, and levitated in the air; they didn't need cranes or masons to build them. They only needed a sense of silence, empty mind, and a blissful imagination.....

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Date: 1/5/2017 8:55:00 AM
Bliss indeed, and such 'simple' measures, congratulations, Kai
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:59:00 PM
Hehe, thank you so much for your applause, Kai!!! ;-)
Date: 1/4/2017 2:33:00 PM
A very good poem well done congrats x
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy!!! *^_^*
Date: 1/4/2017 8:14:00 AM
Teddy, congratulations on your win :-)Hugs Eve
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:43:00 PM
Hi Eve. Thank you so much for your kind applause!!! *^_^*
Date: 1/3/2017 10:11:00 PM
You have the right skills to address a theme like this in such a way, which you did so cleverly. Congratulations on your win, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:41:00 PM
I always love the way you comment on my work, Afzal. Thank you so much for your warm applause, and continuous morale support!!!! *^_^*
Date: 10/26/2016 8:07:00 PM
wow, what a way to do the castle in the air contest!! That's what it is for, right?? LOVE it.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/27/2016 3:25:00 AM
Hehehe, yes Andrea!! Thanks for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 10/26/2016 1:28:00 PM
wow!!this one is creativity enclosed:) any marvel...be it architectural...literature..etc., always emanates from the imaginative and clear mind!loved your narrative//love,Anu:)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/27/2016 3:24:00 AM
Hi Anu. You are very correct!! A clear mind can achieve any marvel.... Thank you so much, for reading and enjoying my verse!! *^_^*
Date: 10/26/2016 11:43:00 AM
I like the imagery and the title itself. They perfectly correlate with each other. ;)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/27/2016 3:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Moon, for reading and enjoying my verses!! *^_^*

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