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The Apple Cried

the apple cried green tears in the autumn bakeoff 7/8/2017

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Date: 7/30/2017 5:34:00 PM

Hello Jeremy, nice to meet you. Your haiku is cute. It made me smile. Have a nice day.

Date: 7/17/2017 10:27:00 AM

Nice Haiku Jeremy! I like the turn in the last line. Didn't expect that! - Dean

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/17/2017 11:04:00 AM

Thank you, Dean for your comment and view :)

Date: 7/9/2017 8:46:00 AM

Nice haiku, Jeremy:)

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/9/2017 11:42:00 AM

Thanks Daniel :)

Date: 7/8/2017 10:04:00 PM

I wonder if the tree weeps when they are picked - food for thought Jeremy:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/9/2017 8:46:00 AM

only if you waste the fruit.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/8/2017 10:07:00 PM

Thanks Jan :) Yes I would think so or does the apple cry then as well?