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The Ant

And what is that you have with you, my tiny insect friend? Such ambition I behold, as you crawl across my hand You carry such a heavy load, for your larder, I suppose. You were sidetracked from your road, while on your way to earth below Were you to bite me, it will sting and I would think you quite unkind If you're my friend, then I will bring a second chance for you to find A deal I'll make, but you must know You mustn't bite me, if you please.... Then I'll put you down, and let you go to your home beneath the trees
____________________________ Second Chance Contest Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/9/2016 10:48:00 AM
That's so sweet, Carrie. I let a spider free who was residing by our bathroom sink -- but, I think, Lin killed it, anyway! Congrats on your win. ;-)
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Date: 9/7/2016 5:17:00 PM
I love this, Carrie. Such an 'outside the box' way you addressed this theme, but such a powerful act of kindness in your 'second chance' offering. Congrats on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/7/2016 4:24:00 PM
Carrie, very cute poem lovely lady, sounds like a nursery rhyme! :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/7/2016 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 7/9/2012 9:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win with this cute lil poem..thnx for stopping by! Jag
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Date: 7/8/2012 6:19:00 PM
carrie, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:38:00 AM
One little teenie tiny poem for the lil guys who inhabit below!!! Three cheers for them lil ants and the poem you erected in their honor, Carrie. I love insect poems! lol....Enjoyed your work AS ALWAYS! gwendolen
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:53:00 PM
too cute, I'd have squished his little ass, congrats on your win Carrie
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:42:00 PM
What a precious little poem. I love it, Carrie. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 7/6/2012 8:54:00 PM
Really sweet poem. congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/6/2012 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem winning.
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Date: 7/6/2012 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carrie
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:59:00 PM
well, I just HAD to see this from looking at the title. It's sure cute. Great one for kids!
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:59:00 PM
and I see congratulations are in order as well!
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula Swanson's "Pact" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2012 5:45:00 PM
What a sweet poem Carrie! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/20/2012 5:12:00 PM
Lovely write....congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 5/20/2012 3:28:00 PM
congratulations on your win in the contest. i like the idea of making a pact with an insect - very clever!
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Date: 5/20/2012 12:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 5/20/2012 2:09:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your win, love this..David
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Date: 5/20/2012 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie an unusual pact xx
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Date: 5/19/2012 10:15:00 PM
What a sweet poem Carrie. I would have never thought of making a pact with an ant. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/17/2012 5:58:00 PM
Your poem shows such a kindness and respect you have for nature. Enjoyed reading. - Gail
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Date: 5/17/2012 5:58:00 PM
Your poem shows such a kindness and respect you have for nature. Enjoyed reading. - Gail
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