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The Answer

only the sweet leaf can set me free, slyly bringing a smile to my face. only the sweet leaf can see my future, for it is the thing closest to me. only the sweet leaf will stick with me through the years, it fixes my imperfections. when did it feel right? the answer; from the beginning, never ending. how is this possible? the answer; is anything really impossible? ask yourself, should you really judge a person for what makes them happy? the answer; no. so now i sit in this structure, accompanied only by my feelings, thoughts, and the sweet leaf. my mind is racing, wondering how such judgement is possible? i realize i should be careful, but am i not? the answer; i am. the sweet leaf could be considerd a work of art, this amaterur piece of rythmical writing could, aswell. my life is free now, my life is clear. i love you, sweet leaf. though you cant hear.

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Date: 3/3/2014 10:56:00 AM
Interesting write. Just correct the misspelled word in your fourth line: The word is correctly spelled "beginning". Everything else looks good.
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March Leebird
Date: 3/3/2014 11:29:00 AM
thank you :~)
Date: 3/3/2014 10:10:00 AM
Very impressive descriptive work..Enjoyed reading it this morn..Welcome to soup..Sara
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March Leebird
Date: 3/3/2014 10:18:00 AM
thank you :~)

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