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the angel on the mantel comes from an old wagon road that cuts from desert brush into the burnished hills where creosote breaks up and scatters at the base of the Chiricahuas where Fort Bowie Calvary slaughtered Apache braves where an old cancerous man treks miles of primitive trail into the heart of a sacred mountain for pure white marble, cut into blocks and stacked one hundred years ago to wait for a truck that never came it's an arduous journey for a piece of rock especially for a man half-blinded as a little boy by that first nuclear blast in that sneak attack on New Mexico arduous for a man riddled with cancer who could be spending his days easier "what behooves you to do it?" "it's something to do while I'm here," he says "we all need something to do while we're here even if you're sitting on your couch, watching t.v. eating potato chips it's something to do this is what I enjoy, so this is what I do" he finds his chunk of marble it tells him what it's supposed to be he sculpts the figure as he sees it roughly and really not rough at all for he feels more than he sees and you feel what he sees angel on the mantel do you feel me

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Date: 12/20/2022 1:06:00 PM
Beautifully written. I love that word "behooves"...at first I thought it may have been shark cartilage with the rippling effect on the wings, but the marble sculpture and shape unique. Whoever found it, and shaped it, is a unique individual indeed, with an eye for detail, others might miss. May all your angels watch over you at Christmas. Leanne.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 3:45:00 PM
I like the blues and ocean/beach tones. But you can use many colours and themes. Best to start small. https://youtu.be/vE-LmzMKeL4
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 3:40:00 PM
https://youtu.be/zBvpWNeqV4M
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Date: 12/20/2022 3:40:00 PM
https://youtu.be/4z9GLs7-INk
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 3:39:00 PM
thank you for the link. a bit like writing poetry..."you've got to do something while you're here...keeps me out of trouble". I've been looking at this lately, not sure if you are into painting. I've been looking at working with the two mediums (wood and epoxy resin / paint). I think very beautiful. You might like this.
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Steven Young
Date: 12/20/2022 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Leanne, for Fantasia and your comment. This is a video of the sculptor, Ted Dickinson... the word "behooves" is used at the beginning in the interview. I know a lady who knew him and collects all of his works... I am always fascinated by his work and his story... https://youtu.be/tqqDfuFfnFg
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 1:07:00 PM
https://youtu.be/IPcNmIhiaoY

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