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The Angel

Prostitution at midnight, moon shining bright please...solution Solution to this torture of these children captured into prostitution Brothels run for brothel keeper's monetary gain... he's no angel Angel is this little girl who is forced to work in his brothel Torture is what this child experiences, her youth the allure Allure of monetary gain causes the brothel keeper to use youth as allure Ten.. sometimes eight year old, girls kept in pens Pens.. locked- in.. totally enclosed no light girls age ten God's wonderful children tortured,heat, dirt..no play Play for little girls should be everyday for they are God's Angels are what these children are, we need to be cudgels Cudgels we should be to defend these children..God's Angels This is Mirror Sestet poetry...I found this when looking up info on the Mirrored Refrain......This is one of those that one needs a thinking cap..

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Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 4/2/2010 11:12:00 AM

niice poem!..i deffinately can appreciate the content aswell i liked the layout and form you've presented!..thankyou for continuing to take an interest in my writting and for all of your kind words!.. you have a good heart!..

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/16/2010 1:18:00 PM

Excellent! Interesting and amazing subject displayed in your poem. Thanks for sharing. Ernilando

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/15/2010 8:57:00 AM

It is a shame that this is found in a number of places! Good write, Sara...Gert

Skat A

Date: 3/7/2010 5:45:00 PM

Very special write. I am glad to have read a piece that took good effort. I agree with James, I find your poem to be strong..With alot of truth and sadness...IRMA...had a pleasure reading...

James Fraser

Date: 3/7/2010 8:17:00 AM

Its so sad that man can stoop so low to harm and lust after our children >> another excellent write Sara >> James

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/7/2010 7:54:00 AM

Amazing subject which is a burning problem of the modern world is very nicely tackled. You have written it in beautiful words on this painful but much needed subject. You have done a great job by bringing such vital issues to limelight may be someone finds a solution to this spreading problem if not today perhaps tomorrow. Thanks for your precious comments on my new Poem Vasava – An untold Story. Best wishes and love Ravindra...........Sara Ken

Brian Strand

Date: 3/6/2010 12:46:00 AM

A fallen world indeed Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.Not familiar with the acronym?

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/4/2010 6:56:00 PM

so strong this poem, the finish was well done, sometimes it hard to write tougher subjects but as long you get a message through to someone one it's completed. thoughts always well heard thanks for this.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/4/2010 12:31:00 PM

bad subject, good writing,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2010 12:01:00 PM

A special piece Sara.. u have captured the entire picture of this issue and Angels shall changes their lives... one day ... thankxxx for this masterpiece today..luv.. Linda-Marie

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 3/4/2010 5:34:00 AM

Emotive and effective. So tragic this goes on in our day - how the perpetrators get away with it I fail to comprehend! Its good to find someone willing to be voice for such souls and a credit it is to your writing in such form too for it helps emphasize the message you deliver... Well done! Thanks for dropping by to comment my write, and yes it is of my experience on this occasion... Hugs, Anna-Marie.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/4/2010 1:53:00 AM

Very nice poem, though it's sad. I like it. TY for your welcome comment. Ernilando

Farah Chamma

Date: 3/4/2010 12:21:00 AM

I watched something about this issue on CNN the other day. Great write and form. Thank you... farah

John Freeman

Date: 3/3/2010 6:09:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this lantern of light in you poem of rhyme Sara. These places are such atrocities that is hard for one to imagine even when you see it with your own eyes. Awesome write to share, with grace. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Dylan Strom

Date: 3/3/2010 5:59:00 PM

Great poem. sad and true.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/3/2010 5:21:00 PM

so sad. a child who you referr to as an angel in your poem. powerful words and meaning. made me sad, but i thought about this today. great poem. -Always&Forever Lynette

Gareth James

Date: 3/3/2010 1:57:00 PM

Very interesting topic Sara. I'm sure you will be inspired to complete it. Thankyou for your kind comments. Gareth

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/3/2010 1:34:00 PM

very strong topic sara, i liked it though you say it needs more, knowing you will definitely keep at it! i liked it